There are a lot of criminals in the world. Some are famous and some are not. There is one anonymous criminal who is a huge danger to African people. This person acts in southern Sudan and Uganda. He is very hard to catch. He has caught a lot of children and made them in to soldiers, slaves and some were killed. Do you know what his name is? His name is Joseph Kony. Jason Russell, a movie director, made a video named 'Kony 2012' to catch him and to persuade other people to participate on catching Kony. However, there are some people who criticizes this video. The topic of this essay is 'Should We make Kony famous?'. I absolutely agree with this topic for four reasons. To begin with, we can attract many peoples' interests. Moreover, making Kony famous will make Kony lose confidence and make him surrender or hide. In addition, making Kony famous will not only capture Kony, but also end the situation in Africa that he is causing. Furthermore, I strongly disagree that making Kony famous will make Kony kill other children.
To begin with, we can attract many peoples' interests. If we make Kony famous, people will participate in catching Kony.
participate in catching Kony. They will know that Kony is a bad person and that he is making many childrens' future disappear. People will do things that might help capturing Kony and saving the children, such as donating to captured kids in the L.R.A(Lord's Resistance Army), which is a evil group that Kony leads through a company named 'Invisible Children Inc'. For example, let's say that a neighbor near you is in danger. Of course you should help them. To get more help you should tell other people about the situation and tell them to help the neighbor.
Moreover, making Kony famous will make Kony lose confidence and make him surrender or hide
If we make Kony famous everyone will know about Kony and Kony should know that everyone near him are his enemies. Maybe the child soldiers will make a rebellion and capture Kony because there are approximately 330,000 child soldiers who don't like Kony, but according to 'Kony 2012' , it said that Kony is alone and he doesn't have any supporters. He will be then captured easily. He will hide or surrender. Making him famous will make us easier to catch him.
In addition, making Kony famous will not only capture Kony but also end the situation in Africa
that he is causing. As I mentioned in the previous paragraph, Kony doesn't have any supporters. If we catch Kony, the situation will be finished. Also, even though there are more L.R.A strength is left, they will soon surrender because their leader is captured. For example, Osama Bin Laden, the leader of a terrorist group Al Qaeda, was captured by an American army. After, he was captured, Al Qaeda stopped terrorism.
Furthermore, I strongly disagree that making Kony famous will make Kony kill other children. This means that he will scared of being caught, so he will kill children to let people know that he is innocent. The opposition says that Kony will be afraid of being captured, so he will kill every children including child slaves and child soldiers. However, every people know that Kony owns a lot of children and has killed many other children, so children will be never get killed by Joseph Kony.
As a result, I strongly believe that we should make Kony famous for four reasons. To begin with, we can attract many peoples' interests. Moreover, making Kony famous will make Kony lose confidence and make him surrender or hide. In addition, making Kony famous will not only capture Kony, but also end the situation in Africa that he is causing. Furthermore, I strongly disagree that making Kony famous will make Kony kill other children.The reasons I told you previously will help us catch Kony and help, protect the children and their future, which will let them lead to a better future if we help.
Great essay Harold. It was well-written and interesting to read. The agrument against the opposition is not clear but otherwise, the essay is very convincing. Next time, add more details to your conclusion as well.
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